自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答过于简短，未直接展开说明原因或背景。建议在开头用一句话直接回答问题，然后用1-2个简明句子提供具体细节或原因，使用连接词使逻辑连贯。例如说明家里交通方式、家庭经济或安全考虑等。注意总句数不超过5句，语言自然且避免冗余。

範例: No, I didn't. My family couldn't afford one when I was a child, so I usually walked or took the bus to school. Because our neighborhood was busy and hilly, my parents preferred I travel with adults rather than ride a bike.

建議: 回答较直接但缺乏具体细节与连贯扩展。建议先用一句话直接回答，然后用一两句具体例子或原因支持，如城市通勤习惯、共享单车的普及或环境意识上升，并使用连接词（for example, because, therefore）增强逻辑。保持自然用词与句子长度适中。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular, especially in cities. For example, many people use shared bikes for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and cycling is also encouraged as a greener alternative to driving.

× Yes, there are a lot of bikes on the street.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of bikes in the streets.

原句使用 'on the street' 在描述普遍存在於城市街道上的自行车时不够自然。英语中常用复数形式 'in the streets' 或泛指的 'on the streets' 来表示多个街道或者街道上的普遍现象；也可以用 'in the street' 表示特定一条街，但此处问的是自行车在国家/城市的流行程度，应使用复数或泛指的表达。建议使用 'in the streets' 或 'on the streets' 来更自然地表达“街上有很多自行车”。