自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Directly answer in the past tense and provide a brief reason or detail. Keep it natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and coherent. Use linking words if adding support. Avoid tense errors and vague phrases like “anyway.”

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a very small flat and there was nowhere safe to ride. However, I sometimes borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride in the park on weekends.

建議: Give a clear, structured opinion using correct grammar and specific details. Start with a topic sentence (Yes/No/It depends), then briefly explain with reasons and an example. Use linking words (however, because, for example) to make it coherent and avoid filler words (uh, yeah).

範例: I think bikes are quite popular among students and commuters in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. However, many people prefer cars for long distances or because of poor cycling infrastructure; for example, in my city there are few safe bike lanes.

× No, I don't have one. I was a child anyway.

✓ No, I didn't have one when I was a child.

The student is answering a past question about having a bike as a child, so past simple is required: use 'didn't have' not 'don't have'. Also the phrase 'I was a child anyway' is awkward and unnecessary; the time clause 'when I was a child' correctly places the action in the past. Suggestion: use past simple for past situations and place time expressions in a clause (e.g. 'when I was a child').

× Uh, I think most of people they is in practice in uh, in our country, but it's not popular for the others we use in Aquarius and others, yeah.

✓ I think most people use bikes for commuting in our country, but they are not popular everywhere.

Original sentence has multiple errors: 'most of people' should be 'most people' (article/quantifier), and adding 'they' creates a redundant subject leading to subject-verb agreement error ('they is' is incorrect; should be 'they are'). 'In practice' is awkward; likely intended meaning is 'for commuting' or 'for practical purposes'. 'It's not popular for the others we use in Aquarius and others' is unclear and ungrammatical; replace with 'they are not popular everywhere' to convey that bikes are not popular in all places. Suggestions: avoid redundant pronouns, ensure subject and verb agree in number, choose clear vocabulary (commuting/practical use/everywhere).