自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答没有直接回答问题，且只是重复了考官的话。要先用一句主题句直接回答（有/没有/偶尔），然后用1-2句具体细节说明，如什么时候有、和谁一起骑、骑车的用途或感受，并使用连接词使表达连贯。注意不要超过五句。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me, and I rode it to school and to visit friends. Because the roads were quiet where I lived, I felt safe and enjoyed cycling every day.

建議: 回答包含了观点，但比较简单且有语法和用词上的改进空间。建议先用完整的主题句明确立场，然后用1-2句具体理由或例子支持观点，使用连接词（for example, because, moreover）来增强连贯性，并尽量使用更准确的词汇（e.g. bicycle usage, commuting, shared bikes）。控制在五句内。

範例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in China because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many people use shared bikes for short trips in cities, and students often ride bicycles to school. Moreover, cycling helps avoid traffic jams and is environmentally friendly.

× Yeah, the bikes are very popular in China and more people like to ride it on the street.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in China and more people like to ride them on the street.

问题类型：12（代词使用不正确）。 错误原因：句中先用复数名词“bikes”，但随后的代词用的是单数“it”，代词与先行词数不一致。英语中代词须与所指名词在人称和数上一致。 改进建议：如果先行词是复数（bikes），应使用复数代词“them”；或者将名词改为单数并调整句意。平时练习时注意先行名词的单复数并相应选择代词。