自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, use correct tense, avoid repetition and include a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add one specific detail (e.g., how you used it or who you rode with). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words if needed.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood with my friends, which helped me become confident and steady on two wheels.

建議: Give a clear opinion, use correct grammar, and provide one specific reason with an example. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) to make your explanation coherent. Avoid fillers and unfinished sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many children learn to ride at a young age. For example, families often buy small bikes for kids so they can practice before moving on to larger motorcycles or scooters.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child because I love bike riding, so I used to drive my bike whenever I want to drive it or ride it. So yeah, I have a I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because I loved bike riding, so I used to ride my bike whenever I wanted to. So yeah, I did have a bike.

The student mixes present and past tenses. The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so verbs should be in past tense: use had, loved, wanted, and rode/used to ride. Also use 'ride' instead of 'drive' for bicycles. Avoid repeating 'I have' in present tense when describing past possession. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Like the bikes are popular in our country because every child used to drive bikes because they have to learn the bike and with the help of this bike they are they, I think they will drive a bigger bikes when they're good, when they get older or.

✓ Bikes are popular in our country because many children used to ride them to learn how to cycle, and with practice I think they will ride bigger bikes when they are older.

Multiple errors: 'drive' is wrong for bicycles; use 'ride'. Mixed tenses: 'used to' (past habit) is okay but 'they have to learn' and 'they will drive' mix meanings—use 'used to ride' or 'ride' consistently. 'A bigger bikes' is incorrect article/number; use 'bigger bikes' or 'a bigger bike'. 'They are they' is redundant and unclear. Simplify sentence structure and keep tense consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Like the bikes are popular in our country because every child used to drive bikes because they have to learn the bike and with the help of this bike they are they, I think they will drive a bigger bikes when they're good, when they get older or.

✓ Bikes are popular in our country because many children used to ride them to learn how to cycle, and with practice I think they will ride bigger bikes when they are older.

Issues with articles and determiners: 'the bikes' and 'the bike' are unnecessary when speaking generally; use plural without 'the' or use 'a bike' for a single item. 'A bigger bikes' mixes singular article with plural noun; choose 'bigger bikes' or 'a bigger bike'. Removing incorrect articles makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural. Grammar problem type ID: 27