自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and clear: begin with a topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Keep sentences natural and avoid irrelevant information. Use linking words (for example, “but” or “however”) to show contrast between past and present. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., “I used to ride a bike” rather than “I used to bike”).

範例: Yes. I used to ride a bike a lot when I was a child because my parents took me to parks and around the neighborhood. However, I rarely ride now because I live far from safe cycling paths.

建議: Answer directly and give clear reasons with specific examples. Start with a short topic sentence (Yes/No), then explain why using linking words such as “because”, “for example”, or “however.” Correct grammar and phrasing: say “bicycles are popular” and give concrete reasons (traffic, lack of bike lanes, culture).

範例: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my city because roads are crowded and there are few dedicated bike lanes. For example, in Tehran many streets are busy and unsafe for cyclists, so most people prefer cars or public transport.

× Yes, I used to bike when I traveled and now I don't use it.

✓ Yes, I used to ride a bike when I was a child, and now I don't use it.

The original sentence mixes verb choice and reference time. 'Used to' is correct for past habitual actions but 'bike' as a verb is informal; 'ride a bike' is clearer. Also the past time reference 'when I traveled' is vague and mismatches the examiner's question about childhood; change to 'when I was a child' to match context. Keep 'now I don't use it' for present negative. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb for past habits and specify the time period accurately.

× And no, I don't think the bike popular because in Tehran we are the street that we can't use bike.

✓ No, I don't think bicycles are popular because in Tehran the streets are not suitable for cycling.

Multiple issues: incorrect word order and missing auxiliary (be) to form 'are popular' (subject-verb agreement and 'be' usage), incorrect article 'the bike' when speaking generally (should be 'bicycles' or 'bikes'), and awkward phrase 'we are the street that we can't use bike.' Reword to state the reason clearly: 'the streets are not suitable for cycling.' This corrects subject-verb agreement, noun plurality, and uses an appropriate prepositional phrase. Suggestion: use plural 'bicycles' for general statements, include verb 'are' for adjectives, and express ability with 'cannot' or 'are not suitable for'.