自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve verb tense and expand content. Start with a clear topic sentence that uses past tense (e.g., “Yes, I did.”), then add 1–2 specific supporting details. Use linking words like “and” or “because” to connect ideas. Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about seven, and I rode it to my friend’s house every weekend. Because my neighbourhood was quiet, I felt safe practicing there, and that helped me gain confidence riding without support.

建議: Use correct subject and explain why with specific reasons and examples. Begin with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, they are.”), then give 1–2 concrete reasons and a short example. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example.”

範例: Yes, they are. Many people use bicycles for short trips and exercise because traffic can be heavy and cycling is cheaper than driving. For example, I often see commuters cycling to work in the morning, especially in city parks and on dedicated bike lanes.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about having a bike when you were a child (past time). The student's reply uses the present tense auxiliary 'have', which is inappropriate for a past situation. Use the past simple auxiliary 'did' for short answers to past tense questions: 'Yes, I did.' Alternatively, 'Yes, I had.' would also be correct. To improve, match the tense of short answers to the question's tense and use 'did' for past yes/no questions or use the past simple main verb 'had.'

× Yes, he is.

✓ Yes, they are.

The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' The student replied 'Yes, he is,' which incorrectly uses a singular male pronoun and singular verb, and does not agree with the plural subject 'bikes.' A correct short answer affirms the plural subject: 'Yes, they are.' You can also say 'Yes, they are popular.' To improve, identify the subject (bikes = plural) and use an appropriate plural pronoun and verb form.