自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + brief detail) and 1–2 supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use linking words if you add reasons or examples (for example, because, so, when).

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to the park almost every weekend. Because the bike was lightweight, I learned to balance quickly and felt very proud when I could ride without training wheels.

建議: Again, you echoed the examiner instead of giving an opinion. For this question give a clear topic sentence (opinion), then support it with a reason and an example or comparison. Use linking words (for instance, however, because) and keep answers natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see bike lanes and shared bicycles, so commuting by bike has become more common in recent years.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/use-of-response error: the expected response should be an affirmative or negative statement in the past tense. Use past simple 'had' to match 'when you were a child'. Provide a short direct answer, optionally with a brief elaboration (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. The correct response should be a statement that matches the present-tense question. Use 'I think' plus the clause 'bikes are popular in my country.' For a negative view use 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.' Provide brief reasons to support the answer if required.