自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır, ancak daha doğal ve etkili olabilir. Giriş cümlesi yeterli; fakat detay verirken bağlaç kullanımı ve özgün ayrıntılar eklenmeli. Örneğin bisikletin özelliklerinden, nerede sürdüğünüzden veya neden her gün sürdüğünüzden bahsedin. Cümle sayısını 3–4 arasında tutarak tekrardan kaçının ve daha çeşitli kelime kullanın.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle as a child and I used to ride it every day. It was a small red bike with a wicker basket, which I often took to visit my friends in the neighbourhood. Because my parents lived nearby and there was little traffic, I felt safe cycling around after school.

建議: Cevap fikir içeriyor ama açıklama belirsiz ve dilbilgisi hataları var. 'People write it' ifadesi yanlış; burada muhtemelen 'ride them' veya 'use them' demek istenmiş. Ayrıca neden popüler olduğunu göstermek için spesifik örnekler, istatistikler veya sebepler (ulaşım maliyeti, çevre bilinci, trafik) verin ve bağlaçlarla bağlantı kurun.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes. For example, cyclists are common in cities where traffic is heavy and public transport is expensive, and some people prefer bikes because they are cheap and eco-friendly.

× I think that they are popular in our country because every day our people write it when they go to the work.

✓ I think that they are popular in our country because every day people ride them when they go to work.

The original sentence misuses verbs and articles. 'write it' is incorrect; the correct verb for using a bike is 'ride' and the pronoun should agree with plural 'bikes' so use 'them'. 'our people' is natural as 'people' without 'our' in this context. 'go to the work' incorrectly includes the definite article; the usual phrase is 'go to work'. Also the tense 'are popular' is fine, but the subordinate clause should use present simple 'ride' to describe habitual action. Suggestion: use 'people ride them when they go to work' to express habitual behavior in the present tense.