自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, natural phrasing and add one supporting detail. Use a clear topic sentence and one brief reason or memory. Keep it under five sentences and use a linking word if adding detail.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I remember often borrowing my neighbor’s bicycle to ride to the park, which I loved because it made me feel independent.

建議: Correct repetition and unclear phrase, give a specific reason or example and use linking words for coherence. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., statistics, common uses, or places where bikes are seen).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many students and commuters use them for short trips, and you can often see bike lanes and rental stations in city centers.

× No, I didn't have bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The noun 'bike' is countable and requires an article in singular form. Use 'a' before a singular, countable noun. Suggestion: use 'a bike' or change to plural 'bikes' if meaning multiple.

× Of course, bikes are popular in my country because all the young young stores have bikes with them.

✓ Of course, bikes are popular in my country because all the young people have bikes.

The phrase 'young young stores' is incorrect: 'young' is repeated and 'stores' does not fit context. Likely intended 'young people'. Also 'have bikes with them' is awkward; use 'have bikes' to express possession. Suggestion: replace 'young young stores' with 'young people' and remove 'with them'.