自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and tense consistency, make the response more natural and concise, and add one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense for past experiences, a clear topic sentence, and a linking phrase for extra detail.

範例: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. It was a bright green-and-yellow BMX that I loved. I often rode it with my parents around our neighborhood on weekends, and we sometimes cycled to the park for picnics.

建議: Give a direct, clear opinion using correct grammar and avoid hesitations. Use linking words (however, because, so) and provide a specific reason or example to support your view. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in the big cities of my country. Because public transport is fast and convenient, most people prefer buses or the metro for daily commuting. However, cycling is more common in smaller towns and for recreational use on weekends.

× Yes I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do have' with past time expression 'when I was a child.' Use past tense 'had' to match the time reference. Suggestion: Use consistent tense with time markers (e.g., 'when I was a child' -> past tense).

× My bike is kind of fancy green and yellow and I usually taking my bike with my family and traveling around over my city.

✓ My bike was kind of a fancy green and yellow one, and I usually took it with my family and rode around the city.

Several issues: adjective phrase needs article and noun ('a fancy green and yellow one'). Tense should be past to match childhood ('was', 'took', 'rode'). 'Taking my bike' is incorrect form; use past simple 'took' or 'rode.' 'Traveling around over my city' is unidiomatic; use 'rode around the city.' Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense and use appropriate noun phrases and verbs ('a ... one', 'took it', 'rode around the city').

× Actually, I think it is isn't 'cause I'm right now living in a big city, most of the people rather than taking the public transport rather than having a bike.

✓ Actually, I don't think so, because I'm living in a big city right now; most people prefer taking public transport rather than having a bike.

Problems: 'it is isn't' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't think so.' Adverb placement: 'right now' should follow 'living' or come after the clause. Use 'prefer' for preference and 'taking public transport' is correct without 'the.' Avoid repeating 'rather than.' Suggestion: Use clear negative ('I don't think so'), correct word order for time expressions, and 'prefer X rather than Y' for comparisons.

× Therefore, umm, there are few people willing to choose a bike instead of.

✓ Therefore, there are few people willing to choose a bike instead.

The sentence ends incompletely with 'instead of' requiring an object. Also filler 'umm' is unnecessary. Use 'few' correctly to mean small number; structure 'willing to choose a bike instead' is idiomatic. Suggestion: Remove fillers, complete comparisons, and ensure 'instead' stands alone or followed by what is being replaced.