自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你在回答问题时重复并把问题当成了回答，导致没有给出信息。首先要直接用陈述句回答问题（例如“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”），然后补充一到两句具体细节。注意句子要简洁，不要超过五句。可以使用连接词（for example, because, when）来组织细节。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to a nearby park every afternoon. For example, I remember learning to balance there with my father’s help.

建議: 你在这里把考官的问题重复了而没有回答。回答时应直接给出观点（Yes/No或It depends），然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持观点。使用连接词（because, for instance, however）使答案更连贯，内容要具体。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and many students ride to school to avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bike when we when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

该句包含重复片段（“we when”）且缺少冠词“a”前的名词修饰，导致句子结构混乱。应删除多余的“we when”，并在“child”前加不定冠词“a”。改正后句子结构完整，时态与考官问题一致，表达清晰。建议：仔细检查口语或书写时是否重复说词，注意在可数单数名词前使用适当冠词（a/an）。

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

该句语法正确，无需修改。时态、主谓一致和冠词使用均无问题。