自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response does not answer the examiner’s question and contains a grammatical error (mixing present tense 'do you have' with 'when you were a child'). To improve, always listen to the question and reply directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or brief statement), then add 1–2 supporting details using correct past tense. Use linking words (for example, 'when', 'because', 'so') to make your answer coherent. Keep answers natural and within 3–5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to my friend’s house every weekend. Because my parents encouraged outdoor play, I learned to balance and ride without help by the time I was seven.

建議: The student repeated the examiner’s question instead of giving an opinion. To improve, give a clear topic sentence stating your opinion (e.g., 'Yes, they are quite popular' or 'No, not very popular'), then support it with specific reasons or examples, using linking words like 'because', 'for example', or 'however'. Keep answers natural, use appropriate vocabulary, and limit to up to 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and students often cycle to school. However, in rural areas cars are more common due to longer distances.

× Do you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the present-tense question 'Do you have' with a past-time reference 'when you were a child.' This is a tense mismatch; use the past simple 'Did you have' to match the time frame. Also the examiner asked about a bike, but the student replied with 'bag,' which is a lexical error (wrong noun). Correct by using the past simple auxiliary 'did' and the base verb 'have,' and use the noun 'bike' to answer the examiner's question.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's utterance repeats the examiner's question and lacks a direct answer. The original question uses present simple to ask about a general truth; the correct response should use present simple as well (I think bikes are popular). Provide a subject and verb to form a complete sentence. If expanding, add reasons or examples in present simple to support the opinion.