自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (past tense and subject-verb agreement), use a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and add a specific supporting detail with a linking word. For example: use 'I had' not 'I did have' (both are possible but simpler is better), 'when I was a child', 'learned to ride', and correct verb forms ('taught', 'succeeded'). Keep answers concise (max 3–4 sentences).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it with my father’s help, and he patiently taught me over several afternoons. Although I fell many times at first, I finally succeeded and felt very proud.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, then give specific reasons and use linking words (e.g., 'however', 'because', 'since'). Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, plural nouns) and word choice: say 'not very popular', 'limited facilities provided by the government', and 'have become more popular since COVID-19'. Provide one or two concise supporting details such as examples of limited infrastructure or increased health concerns after COVID-19.

範例: I think bicycles are not very popular in my country because there are limited bike lanes and few secure parking areas. However, they have become more popular since COVID-19 because people prefer cycling for exercise and to avoid crowded public transport.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I were a child and I actually remember how I learned to write them because my father teach them to me actually. It cost a lot of tries but finally I succeed.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child and I actually remember how I learned to ride it because my father taught me. It took a lot of tries but finally I succeeded.

Multiple errors: 'were' should be 'was' to agree with singular subject I in past tense (subject-verb agreement). 'write them' is incorrect verb/meaning; likely meant 'ride it' (correct verb and pronoun agreement, singular bike -> it). 'teach' should be past tense 'taught' (past tense issue). 'them to me' is wrong pronoun/object; use 'me' directly. 'It cost a lot of tries' is incorrect idiom and verb tense; use 'It took a lot of tries' (past tense and correct collocation). 'I succeed' should be past 'I succeeded' (past tense). Suggestions: use past simple consistently for completed past actions, ensure verb forms match subject and tense, choose correct verbs for intended meaning ('ride' not 'write'), and use correct pronouns (it/me) for singular objects and direct objects.

× I do think they are not that popular because a few limitations of facility that provided by governments, but I think since COVID-19 it become more popular.

✓ I think they are not very popular because of some limitations in the facilities provided by the government, but I think since COVID-19 they have become more popular.

Errors: 'a few limitations of facility' is awkward and needs correct quantifier and noun form—use 'some limitations in the facilities' (plural) (quantifier/noun agreement). 'that provided by governments' should be 'provided by the government' or 'the government' for general reference; 'government' as a singular collective noun fits better here (article issue). 'it become' should be 'they have become' to match plural subject 'they' and present perfect to indicate change since COVID-19 (subject-verb agreement and tense). Suggestions: use 'some' for unspecified plural items, match noun number (facilities), use correct preposition 'because of', and use present perfect 'have become' to talk about changes starting in the past and continuing to the present.