自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and concise, correct vocabulary (use 'riding' not 'grinding'), and add a short supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it under five sentences and use precise descriptions.

範例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I first learned to ride it at around seven years old, and it was a 14‑inch kids’ bike. Because my neighborhood was safe, I practiced in the park every afternoon and quickly got confident.

建議: Clarify and tighten your points, fix awkward phrasing ('easy way more' unclear), and add a specific reason or example using a linking word. Use varied vocabulary like 'mode of transport' and explain why popularity changed during the pandemic.

範例: Yes, bikes became especially popular in my country during the pandemic. For example, many people chose cycling because it is an affordable and socially distanced mode of transport, and moreover it helped avoid crowded public buses.

× I first learned grinding a bike when I was about 7 years old.

✓ I first learned to ride a bike when I was about 7 years old.

'Learn' is typically followed by the infinitive 'to' plus a verb (learn to do something), not the gerund 'learning' or 'learned grinding'. Use 'learned to ride' for acquiring the skill of riding a bike. Also 'ride a bike' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: Use 'learned to + base verb' (learned to ride).

× It was more about 14 inches in diameter.

✓ It was about 14 inches in diameter.

The word 'more' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here. Use 'about' alone to indicate an approximate measurement. 'More about' is redundant. Suggestion: omit 'more' when giving approximate sizes.

× It's an easy way more and it's an easy mode of transportation, especially at times when most cars are not yet OK to be on the road.

✓ It's an easy way to get around and an easy mode of transportation, especially at times when most cars are not allowed on the road.

This sentence has multiple issues: 'way more' is incorrect here; likely intended 'way to get around' or 'way to travel'. 'It's an easy way to get around' uses the infinitive correctly. 'Most cars are not yet OK to be on the road' is informal and unclear; use 'are not allowed on the road' or 'are not yet permitted' to convey restrictions. Also use parallel structure 'an easy way to get around and an easy mode of transportation' or choose one phrase. Suggestion: use clear verbs (to get around) and formal phrasing (not allowed/ permitted).