自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你把考官的问题重复成了疑问句而不是直接回答。需直接回应问题并给出简短的主题句，然后用一到两句具体细节补充。注意语法（例如：when you were a child）。建议回答控制在最多五句内，避免重复。

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven. I used it to ride to my friend’s house and to the park every weekend, which helped me become more independent and confident.

建議: 回答有明确观点但不够连贯和具体。注意不要把原因句中断，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并加入具体细节或例子支持观点。保持回答自然且不超过五句。

範例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are still very popular because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to go shopping in crowded city centers where parking is difficult.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

问题类型：存在结构/冠词使用错误（在本列表中对应“3:There be issue”和“22:Article errors”相关）。句中缺少限定词“a”。在表示过去的时间状况短语“when you were a child”前需要使用不定冠词“a child”。建议：在类似表达中，当谈论某人作为一个类别的一员（一个孩子）时，使用不定冠词“a”。

× Yes, I do because. It is cheap and convenient.

✓ Yes, I do, because it is cheap and convenient.

问题类型：句子结构错误（26）和标点/连接词使用不当。原句在“because”后没有接从句就断句，导致不完整。应将两个部分连成一个完整句子，或把理由作为独立句子改写为“Because it is cheap and convenient.” 更自然的做法是用逗号连接："Yes, I do, because it is cheap and convenient." 建议：使用because引导原因从句时要跟完整的主谓结构，或把because放句首并保证从句完整。