自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Grammar and tense are incorrect and answer is too brief. Use past tense for childhood, give a direct topic sentence then a brief supporting detail. Add linking words if adding explanation. For example, say whether you had one and why or describe an alternative.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived close by, and my parents preferred I stay safe on foot. As a result, I didn't learn to ride until I was older.

建議: Use present tense for current opinions and avoid unnecessary negation. Give a clear topic sentence with reasons or examples, and use linking words (because, however, for example). Be concise (max 5 sentences).

範例: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because public transport and cars are more common. For example, in my city most people commute by bus or car, and there are few bike lanes, so cycling is not convenient for daily travel.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't have.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense, so the response must also be in the past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense and does not match the past-time reference. Use the past tense form 'didn't have' to indicate that you did not possess a bike during childhood. Suggestion: Match the tense of the answer to the tense of the question; use 'didn't have' for past possession.

× No, I didn't think the bike is popular in my country.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

The examiner's question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' is in the present tense, so the student's reply should be in the present tense. 'I didn't think' is past tense and 'the bike is popular' uses singular 'the bike' which does not match general plural reference. Use present tense 'I don't think' and plural 'bikes are' for general statements about popularity. Suggestion: Use 'I don't think bikes are popular in my country' to express a current opinion about a general group.