自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız kısa ve yanlış formda. Soruyu tekrar etmek yerine doğrudan cevap verin; geçmiş zaman kullanın ve bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın. Gerekirse 1–2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, but) kullanarak açıklama ekleyin ve detay verin (ör. kaç yaşındaydınız, nerede kullandınız, kim size verdi). Örnek: "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and rode it to visit friends after school because there were safe streets near my home."

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and rode it to school and to my friends’ houses because we lived in a quiet neighborhood with little traffic.

建議: Cevabınız anlamsal ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor; net bir görüş belirtin ve nedeninizi açıklayın. Doğru dilbilgisi (use of 'is/are', 'do/does', 'have/has') ve tam cümleler kullanın. Bağlaçlarla gerekçenizi genişletin (for example, because, so) ve spesifik kanıt verin (ör. altyapı, kültür, iklim). Örnek: "No, bikes are not very popular in my country because there is little cycling infrastructure and many people prefer cars."

範例: No, bikes are not very popular in my country because there are few bike lanes and most people find driving more convenient. For example, long distances and limited public cycling facilities discourage people from cycling.

× I think it's not popular in my country because my country not.

✓ I don't think bicycles are popular in my country because they aren't common here.

The student attempted to express a general present-tense opinion but used incorrect negation and word order. Use 'I don't think' to negate a belief in the present tense and 'bicycles are not common' or 'they aren't common' for natural phrasing. Also replace 'my country not' with a proper clause 'they aren't common here.' Avoid using 'it' for plural nouns; use 'bicycles' or 'they'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× My country haven't got our way.

✓ My country doesn't have the infrastructure for them.

The original sentence mixes subject-verb agreement and inappropriate pronoun use. 'My country' is singular and requires 'doesn't have' rather than 'haven't got.' 'Our way' is vague and incorrectly refers back to 'bikes'; use 'infrastructure for them' or 'safe bike lanes' to clarify. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'my country doesn't.' Grammar problem type ID:12