自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and gives relevant detail, but it has some hesitations, minor grammar issues, and slight redundancy. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (“uh”), correct tense/word choices, and use one linking phrase to add a specific detail or result. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

範例: Yes, I had several bikes as a child. The last one was a modern-looking model with two regular wheels and two small training wheels to help me balance. Because of that bike, I learned to ride confidently and rarely fell once I mastered balancing.

建議: Your answer communicates the main idea but contains unclear phrasing and some inaccurate expressions. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, replacing vague or incorrect phrases (e.g. “there is no feel, nothing needed”) with specific reasons, and adding one concrete example or statistic to support your point. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap, convenient and eco-friendly. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes in cities since they avoid traffic and cost less than public transport. Therefore, cycling is a common choice for daily travel.

× So I have learned a lot from that last bike.

✓ So I learned a lot from that last bike.

The surrounding context is about past events (had bikes when child), so using simple past 'learned' is more appropriate than present perfect 'have learned'. Use simple past to indicate a completed action at a specific time in the past. Suggestion: replace 'have learned' with 'learned' when referring to a past experience tied to a specific time.'

× They are very good transport system so they there is no feel, nothing needed.

✓ They are a very good means of transport, so you don't need anything else.

Multiple issues: 'transport system' needs an article and is count/noncount mismatch; 'They are a very good means of transport' is idiomatic. The original has ungrammatical 'so they there is no feel, nothing needed.' which mixes subjects and verbs incorrectly and uses 'feel' wrongly. I corrected to 'so you don't need anything else' to convey intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'means of transport' or 'transport option' and ensure subject-verb agreement and clear pronouns ('you' instead of 'they there is').'