自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap kısa ve kibar; ancak gereksiz ifade (“I am sorry about that”) ve tekrarlar var. Doğrudan cevap verildikten sonra kısa bir gerekçe veya anı ekleyerek cevabı zenginleştirin. Bağlaç kullanarak (for example, because, so) mantıklı bir akış sağlayın. Ayrıca cümle sayısını 1–3 arasında tutun ve doğal ifadeler kullanın.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. My family couldn’t afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. For example, I remember enjoying walks with friends instead.

建議: Cevap fikir veriyor fakat tekrarlar, dilbilgisi hataları ve akıcılık sorunları var. Net ve doğru bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, ardından bir veya iki destekleyici neden verin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, therefore) kullanın ve karşılaştırma yaparken doğru dilbilgisi kullanmaya dikkat edin (e.g., faster than cars). Kelime tekrarlarından kaçının.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming more popular in Istanbul because traffic congestion makes cars slow and unpredictable. As a result, many people choose bikes for short trips since they are often faster than cars in busy areas and cheaper to maintain.

× No, unfortunately I didn't have a bike and I am sorry about that.

✓ No, unfortunately I didn't have a bike and I'm sorry about that.

The sentence mixes past tense (didn't have) with present continuous 'I am sorry'. It is acceptable to express present regret about a past situation, but contractions are more natural in spoken English. Suggestion: use 'I'm sorry' for natural speech and keep 'didn't have' for past tense.

× Yes, in my country, even my in my city Istanbul, bikes are very popular because there are so many cars in the city and there are so much traffic and bikes is more bikes is more faster.

✓ Yes, in my country, even in my city, Istanbul, bikes are very popular because there are so many cars and so much traffic, and bikes are faster.

Multiple issues: 'my in my city' is incorrect word order and extra 'my'. Use 'in my city, Istanbul'. 'There are so much traffic' uses 'much' with a countable/uncountable mismatch; 'traffic' is uncountable so 'so much traffic' is correct but previously had 'there are' which pairs with plural; use 'there is so much traffic' or 'so much traffic' after 'because'. Also 'bikes is' is subject-verb agreement error; plural 'bikes' needs 'are'. Repetition 'bikes is more bikes is more faster' is redundant; use 'bikes are faster' or 'bikes are quicker'.