自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi (ví dụ: “Yes, I did.”), sau đó cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể (mô tả chiếc xe, bạn thường đi khi nào, cảm xúc của bạn). Tránh lỗi thì (use past tense), sửa từ vựng sai (bike, not pie), và dùng liên từ hợp lý để câu mạch lạc. Giữ tối đa 4–5 câu, tránh thông tin không rõ ràng.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was small I had a yellow bicycle with a small basket on the front. I used to ride it around my neighbourhood every afternoon to visit friends. I wasn’t very skilled at riding at first, but I loved it and practiced a lot.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, dùng thì phù hợp và từ vựng chính xác (bike, not pie). Bắt đầu bằng một câu trực tiếp nêu quan điểm, sau đó dùng 1–2 câu giải thích cụ thể với liên từ (e.g., however, because). Tránh mơ hồ như “normal amount”; thay bằng cụm từ cụ thể như “quite common” hoặc “less common than in some countries”.

範例: Not really. Bicycles are fairly common in some cities, but overall they are less popular here than in many European countries. However, in the past many people cycled more often because they had fewer cars and it was a cheaper way to travel.

× Yes I do, when I go a small I have a yellow pie with half extra. To circle for keeping plans, although I was not good but I really love it.

✓ Yes, I had one. When I was small I had a yellow bike with an extra seat. I rode it to go on trips with friends; although I wasn't very good at cycling, I really loved it.

The original contains multiple tense and word-choice errors. Use past tense to describe childhood (had, was small). 'Go a small' is incorrect; use 'was small'. 'Pie' is a wrong word; likely 'bike'. 'Half extra' is unclear; I suggested 'an extra seat' if intended. 'To circle for keeping plans' is ungrammatical; changed to 'I rode it to go on trips with friends' to convey purpose. 'I was not good but' needs past tense and a conjunction: 'although I wasn't very good at cycling'. Suggestions: 1) Use past simple for past events (had, was, rode). 2) Choose correct nouns (bike not pie). 3) Use clear clauses to express purpose and contrast ('although' + comma).

× Not really, I think it is normal amount of pie comparing to other countries. But in the past people were cycling a lot because we are very poor at that time.

✓ Not really. I think the number of bikes is about normal compared to other countries. But in the past people cycled a lot because we were very poor then.

Errors: 'normal amount of pie' is wrong vocabulary and quantifier usage; use 'number of bikes' or 'normal amount of bikes' and 'compared to' not 'comparing to'. Use past simple for past habits: 'people cycled a lot'. 'We are very poor at that time' mixes present 'are' with past time; use 'we were very poor then'. Suggestions: 1) Use correct nouns and quantifiers for countable items ('number of bikes'). 2) Use 'compared to' for comparisons. 3) Keep tense consistent with time expressions ('in the past' -> past tense).