自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is correct but too short and lacks detail. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., what kind of bike, how often you rode it, who you rode with, or a brief memory). Use a linking word if you add more than one detail. Keep responses natural and no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle with training wheels that my parents gave me when I was six, and I rode it almost every afternoon around the neighborhood. Because I practiced a lot, I learned to ride without the training wheels within a few weeks, which made me feel very proud.

建議: Your answer is inaccurate and repeated the previous past-tense reply instead of answering the question. Use the present tense and give specific reasons or examples to support your opinion (e.g., commuting, leisure, bike lanes, cultural habits). Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your view, then add one or two supporting points using linking words such as because or for example.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances and there are growing numbers of dedicated bike lanes in cities. For example, students and office workers often cycle to school or work to avoid traffic and save money.

× 'Student: Yes, I did.'

✓ 'Student: Yes, I do.'

'The question "Do you think bikes are popular in your country?" is in the present simple tense and asks about a current general opinion. The student answered with "Yes, I did," which is past simple and does not match the present-tense question. Use the present simple response "Yes, I do" to agree with the present-tense question. Suggestion: Match the tense of short answers to the question by using "do/does" for present simple questions (e.g., "Yes, I do").'