自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g. 'didn't like', 'I always wanted one'), avoid fillers like 'umm', and provide one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g. dangerous, risky, not confident in sports).

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My mother didn't like the idea because she thought it was too dangerous—I wasn't confident in sports and she worried I might get hurt, so she refused to buy one.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and a specific supporting reason using linking words. Correct countable/uncountable forms (say 'public transport' or 'public transports' depending on context) and avoid repeated fillers. Add a concrete example or brief comparison to strengthen the answer.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. Because public transport is often overcrowded, many commuters choose cycling as a faster and cheaper alternative—for example, office workers in the city use e-bikes to avoid rush-hour crowds.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because umm, my mom didn't really liked it even though I wanted always.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because, umm, my mom didn't really like it even though I always wanted one.

Use of 'didn't' requires the base form of the verb: 'didn't like' not 'didn't liked'. Also 'wanted always' is awkward; adverb 'always' should come before the verb 'wanted', and 'one' clarifies the object. Suggestion: Place adverbs before the main verb after auxiliary negation and use the base verb after 'did'. Type ID: 2

× But she said it's too dangerous for me because I was not good at any sports, any kind of sports.

✓ But she said it was too dangerous for me because I wasn't good at any kind of sport.

'It's' (it is) is inconsistent with past reporting 'she said' — use past tense 'it was'. 'I was not' is acceptable but contracted form 'I wasn't' is natural. 'Any sports' and 'any kind of sports' are unidiomatic; use 'any kind of sport' or 'any sport'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent when reporting past speech and use singular 'sport' with 'any kind of'. Type ID: 26

× So umm, I wasn't available to have.

✓ So, umm, I wasn't able to have one.

'Wasn't available to have' is incorrect collocation; the correct expression is 'wasn't able to have' meaning 'couldn't have'. Also add 'one' to indicate 'a bike'. Suggestion: Use 'able to' for ability in the past and include the object. Type ID: 26

× Yes, I think it's really popular because sometimes the public transportations are really populated and too crowded, so umm, I think many people choose to ride bikes when they are, umm, going to work.

✓ Yes, I think they're really popular because sometimes public transport is very crowded, so, umm, I think many people choose to ride bikes when they are, umm, going to work.

'It's really popular' is singular while referring to 'bikes' (plural) — use 'they're'. 'Public transportations' is incorrect: 'public transport' is uncountable; do not pluralize. 'Populated' is wrong here; use 'crowded'. Also 'too crowded' can be fine but 'very crowded' is more natural. Maintain plural agreement with 'bikes'. Suggestion: Match subject number and use correct uncountable noun 'public transport' and adjective 'crowded'. Type ID: 22},{