自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and naturalness. Use correct past tense and a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it around the park near my house. I remember practicing until I could ride without help, which made me feel very proud.

建議: Make your response more fluent and cohesive. Start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, for instance). Avoid short choppy sentences; combine related ideas into one or two sentences.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For instance, many neighborhoods have bike-rental stations, and my family often rented bikes to go to the market or to nearby parks.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student mixed present tense 'have' with the past time phrase 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'had' to match the past reference. Suggestion: use past tense verbs when describing past events (e.g., 'I had a bike').

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence uses correct present tense but the pronoun 'our' may be inappropriate for a single speaker answering a general question; 'my country' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'my country' when speaking about your own country.

× Actually, they rent.

✓ Actually, you can rent them.

'They rent' is ungrammatical because 'rent' needs an agent or modal; likely meaning is people can rent bikes. Use modal construction 'can rent' with object 'them' or passive 'bikes are rented'. Suggestion: rephrase to 'you can rent them' or 'bikes can be rented' to express availability.

× We rented bikes in our neighborhood.

✓ We used to rent bikes in our neighborhood.

'We rented bikes' is grammatically acceptable but using 'used to rent' better conveys habitual past action. If simply stating a past single event, 'We rented bikes' is fine; if describing repeated past habit, use 'We used to rent bikes'. Suggestion: choose 'used to' for habitual past actions.