自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Provide a direct answer (yes/no) with a brief topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences. Mention age, type of bike, where you rode it, or a short memory to make it more vivid.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was eight and it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. I used to ride it every afternoon around the park near my house, which helped me learn balance and made me feel independent.

建議: Start with a clear direct answer, then explain why and give a specific example or comparison using linking words (for example, because, so, however). Use a wider range of vocabulary (e.g., commute, recreational, eco-friendly) and keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you often see dedicated bike lanes and commuters who cycle to work to avoid traffic and save money, which makes cycling both practical and eco-friendly.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/response error. The correct response should be a declarative sentence in the past tense to match the question. Use 'I had' (past simple) to state ownership in the past and include the subject 'I'. Suggestion: respond with a full sentence that directly answers the question, e.g. 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, in my country bikes are popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence is grammatical but the word order is slightly unnatural for spoken English. This is a present tense statement; keep present simple 'are' for general facts. Move 'in my country' to the end for more natural word order: 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: Prefer 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.' or 'Yes, cycling is popular in my country.'