自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then add one or two specific supporting details (age, who gave it, how often you used it) using a linking word. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 short sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven from my parents, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. Because of that regular practice, I became quite confident riding on busy streets.

建議: Your answer is brief and repetitive. To improve, start with a clear opinion, then give specific supporting details and a linking word to connect points (for example, because or especially). Mention who uses bikes, why they are popular, or give a short example. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I do. Bikes are popular in my country, especially among students and commuters, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use electric bikes to avoid traffic during rush hour.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/response error. In this context the expected answer should be a statement about the past, so use past simple 'I had' rather than repeating the question. Improve by recognizing question form and replying with an appropriate declarative sentence: subject + past-tense verb (I had).

× Yes I do. I think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original has a punctuation issue rather than a tense error: add a comma after 'Yes' to follow standard written conventions. The tenses are appropriate: 'do' (present) and 'think' (present) correctly express current opinion. Suggestion: include comma after short interjection 'Yes' and ensure spacing after punctuation for clarity.