自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and unrelated words (e.g., "white blind", "buy every early day"). Give a direct, coherent topic sentence, then one or two supporting details using linking words. Use correct past tense for childhood and specific details (colour, who gave it, where you rode it, a memorable moment).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small white bicycle my parents bought for me, and I rode it around our neighborhood every morning during summer. Because I practiced a lot, I became confident cycling on busy streets by the time I was ten.

建議: This answer is repetitive and grammatically confused. Start with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Mention statistics or common situations if possible (commuting, exercise, affordability). Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in my city many students and office workers cycle to school or work to avoid traffic, and affordable bike shops make them easy to buy.

× I have a white blind I like to buy every early day.

✓ I had a white bike that I used to ride every morning.

The student used present tense 'have' while the question asked about childhood (past). This is a present tense issue (ID 6). Also words are incorrect ('blind' should be 'bike'; 'buy' is wrong verb; 'early day' should be 'every morning'). Suggestion: use past simple for childhood context ('had'), use correct nouns and verbs ('bike', 'ride'), and a natural time expression ('every morning').

× Of course, I think buying is popular in my country because my father and my mother have one by everyone have buy and what we get to buy it every every day.

✓ Of course. I think bikes are popular in my country because almost everyone owns one and we use them every day.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems (ID 26) and errors in tense and word choice. 'Buying is popular' is unnatural; use 'bikes are popular'. 'My father and my mother have one by everyone have buy' is ungrammatical and confusing. Correct structure: subject + verb + reason. Use present simple for general facts ('are popular', 'owns', 'use'). Suggestions: simplify to 'almost everyone owns one', use 'every day' once, and keep consistent present-tense for general truths.