自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, trả lời rõ ràng với câu chủ đề ngắn gọn rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ. Cụ thể: dùng thì quá khứ hoàn chỉnh (had) thay vì hiện tại, sửa từ sai (buy → bike), bỏ các âm ừ/hesitation như "uh". Ví dụ cấu trúc: chủ đề (Yes/No + had + object + khi nào), rồi chi tiết (who gave it / how you used it).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was in grade six. My parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I rode it to school almost every day during that year.

建議: Tổ chức câu rõ ràng theo thì và ý: nêu ý chính (Yes/No hoặc It used to be), giải thích với lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Sửa thì (it was popular 20 years ago), tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (we were students / people now prefer...). Hạn chế tiếng ừ/hesitation. Nên cung cấp 1–2 lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: phát triển giao thông công cộng, thu nhập cao hơn).

範例: Bikes used to be very popular about twenty years ago, but their use has declined. Nowadays many people prefer cars or motorbikes because public transport and incomes have improved, so fewer students ride bikes to school.

× Yes I have a buy when I was great uh in grade 6.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was in grade 6.

The original sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time reference 'when I was...'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past timeframe. Also 'buy' is a typo for 'bike' and 'great' seems to be 'grade'. Improve by using 'I had a bike when I was in grade 6.' Ensure verb tense matches time expressions and correct word choice.

× It was popular when it's umm, 20 years ago, but now we are using bike when we are, we was, uh, we were a student and we used to go to school and now people are often usually.

✓ Bicycles were popular about 20 years ago because when we were students we used to ride them to school, but now people often use cars or motorcycles.

The original has multiple tense inconsistencies and awkward phrasing. 'It was popular when it's...20 years ago' mixes past and present; use past 'were popular' and a clear time expression 'about 20 years ago'. 'we are, we was, we were a student' contains subject-verb agreement and tense errors; use 'we were students'. 'we used to go to school' is fine but needs connection. 'now people are often usually' is redundant; use 'now people often use...'. Also replace 'bike' with 'bicycles' or 'them' for clarity. Structure the sentence into a clear contrast between past and present.