自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is brief and contains a grammar error (‘hide’ instead of ‘had’). Give a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and under five sentences. For example, mention when you got the bike, who it belonged to, what you used it for, or a short memory to make your answer more engaging.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, I received it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used it every day to ride to my friends’ houses. Because the roads near my home were safe, I felt confident practicing tricks and exploring the neighborhood.

建議: Your response answers the question but is too short and has a subject-verb agreement error (‘bikes… are’ or ‘they are’ rather than ‘it’s’). Add specific reasons and linking words to support your opinion (for example, mention commuting, exercise, or bike-sharing schemes). Use varied vocabulary and keep it concise.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, cities have bike lanes and several bike-sharing programs, so more people choose cycling to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes, I hide a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student used 'hide' which is the present tense of the verb 'hide' meaning to conceal; the intended meaning is possession in the past. This is a past-tense verb choice error related to number/tense. According to the provided list, correctable types include singular/plural and tense issues; here the correct past-tense verb is 'had'. Suggestion: use the past tense of 'have' (had) to indicate possession in the past: 'I had a bike.'

× Yes, it's very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, they're/they are very popular in my country.

The student used 'it's' (it is) which refers to a singular noun, but the question asks about 'bikes' plural. The correct subject pronoun should match the plural noun 'bikes', so use 'they are' (they're) or rephrase 'Bikes are very popular in my country.' Suggestion: match subject number and verb: 'Bikes are very popular in my country.' or 'Yes, they're very popular in my country.'