自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Directly answer the question with correct tense and give 1–2 supporting details. Use a clear topic sentence, correct past tense, and avoid fragments. Include linking words like “and” or “so” to make it coherent. For example, say when you had it, who gave it to you, or a brief memory about riding it.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was eight, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. It helped me learn balance and made my childhood more active.

建議: Answer directly and clearly, using complete sentences and correct grammar. State your opinion, give a specific reason, and use linking words such as “because” or “so” to connect ideas. Mention whether you mean bicycles or motorcycles and give a concrete example or comparison.

範例: I think motorcycles are more popular than bicycles in the Philippines because they are faster and cheaper for daily commuting. For example, many families use motorbikes to travel through narrow streets and to avoid traffic, so they are a practical choice for most people.

× Yes, I have a bike. I was.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the answer should use past tense. 'I have' is present tense; 'I was' is incomplete and incorrect here. Use the simple past 'I had a bike' to match the time reference. Suggestion: use 'I had a bike' or 'Yes, I did' for a short answer.

× Uh, maybe because, uh, popular in my in my account in my in Philippines, a motorcycle because it easy to use.

✓ Maybe in my country, motorcycles are more popular in the Philippines because they are easy to use.

This sentence has multiple tense and grammar problems. The speaker is trying to express a general present fact, so present simple should be used. 'in my account' is incorrect; likely 'in my country' is meant. 'a motorcycle' should be plural 'motorcycles' to speak generally, and 'it easy to use' lacks the verb 'is' and needs plural agreement 'they are easy to use.' Also word order and articles are wrong. Suggestion: say 'Maybe in my country, motorcycles are more popular because they are easy to use.'