自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a grammatically correct, concise response with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use past tense consistently and avoid unnecessary words. Add a linking phrase if you give an extra detail.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike with two training wheels when I was about six, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. It helped me become more confident on the road.

建議: Organize your answer: start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and a comparison. Use correct vocabulary (bike, not bug) and correct word order. Use linking words like 'because', 'for example' and 'however' to connect ideas. Keep sentences simple and grammatical.

範例: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many students commute to school by bicycle, and people often choose bikes for shopping nearby. However, for longer journeys people usually prefer cars or buses.

× Yes, I have in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I had one in my childhood.

The student used present tense 'have' with a past time expression 'in my childhood'. Use the past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Also add the object 'one' (a bike) to make the sentence complete: 'I had one in my childhood.'

× I have a pink bike with two wheels.

✓ I had a pink bike with two wheels.

The original sentence uses present tense 'have' while referring to childhood, so change to past 'had'. The article 'a' is correct. No other article changes are needed; ensure tense matches the time reference.

× I think most people first.

✓ I think most people do at first.

The original fragment 'most people first' is incomplete and unclear. Add the auxiliary 'do' and prepositional phrase 'at first' to form a complete idea: 'Most people do at first' meaning initially they use bikes. Ensure clarity by possibly adding what 'do' refers to (use bikes).

× Well I think many people in my country still use bugs, especially for short trips and students going to school.

✓ Well, I think many people in my country still use bikes, especially for short trips and students going to school.

The word 'bugs' is a wrong lexical choice; the intended word is 'bikes'. Also add a comma after 'Well' for natural speech rhythm. Ensure noun 'bikes' is used to convey the correct meaning.

× They are cheap and easy to park, but for longer journeys people usually car choose cars or bus.

✓ They are cheap and easy to park, but for longer journeys people usually choose cars or take a bus.

The phrase 'car choose cars or bus' has incorrect word order and missing verbs/articles. Correct ordering is 'people usually choose cars' and for 'bus' include the verb 'take' and the article 'a': 'take a bus'. This fixes sentence structure and articles to make it grammatically correct.