自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 응답이 전반적으로 이해되지만 문법과 자연스러운 표현을 다듬어야 합니다. 현재 시제와 과거 시제가 혼용되어 있고(예: “Yes I am.”, “I usually ride” 대신 과거형 사용 필요), 관사와 전치사 사용이 어색합니다(‘ride a bike at park’ → ‘in the park’). 답변 구조는 주제 문장으로 시작했지만 추가 세부사항이 부족하고 연결어 사용이 미미합니다. 개선을 위해: 1) 정확한 시제 사용(과거 경험 설명에는 과거형), 2) 관사와 전치사 교정, 3) 한두 개의 구체적 세부사항(몇 살 때 배웠는지, 누구와 자주 탔는지)과 연결어(if/so/because/and then 등) 사용으로 2–3문장으로 자연스럽게 확장하세요.

範例: Yes, I did. My father taught me to ride a bike in the park when I was about seven, so I learned very quickly. After that, I often rode my bike with friends near my house every weekend.

建議: 의견은 분명하지만 문법과 표현이 어색합니다. ‘Since country operate bicycle rental system’ 부분에서 주어-동사 일치와 관사 부족(‘the country’), 시제 및 연결어 사용이 필요합니다. 또한 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하면 좋은 점수를 얻을 수 있습니다(예: 편리성, 비용 절감, 환경친화적). 개선을 위해: 1) 문장을 정확한 문법으로 고치기(주어-동사 일치, 관사 추가), 2) 구체적 이유나 예시 제공, 3) 연결어(for example, because, therefore 등)로 문장 흐름 정리하세요.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming very popular in my country. In recent years the government introduced a bicycle rental system, so many people use bikes for short trips because they are cheap and convenient. For example, I often rent a bike to go to the supermarket or to meet friends nearby.

× Yes I am.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question asked about past possession ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?') so the appropriate short answer uses the auxiliary 'did' not 'am'. Use 'Yes, I did.' for past-tense possession. Make sure to match auxiliary verb to question tense and add a comma after 'Yes' for clarity.

× When I was a child my father taught me how to ride bike at park, so I usually ride a bike since I was a child.

✓ When I was a child my father taught me how to ride a bike in the park, so I rode a bike often since I was a child.

Multiple issues: 'ride bike' needs the article 'a bike' and 'at park' should be 'in the park' (preposition). 'Usually ride' with 'since I was a child' is incorrect because 'since' requires a perfect tense describing an action continuing from the past to present (e.g., 'have ridden'), or use past tense if describing past habit. Here changed to past tense 'rode' and 'often' to express habitual past action. Ensure consistent tense and correct prepositions/articles.

× Yeah, I think so. Since country operate bicycle rental system, people started to use bike usually and me too.

✓ Yes, I think so. Since the country started operating a bicycle rental system, people began to use bikes more often, and I did too.

Problems fixed: 'Since country operate' needs definite article 'the country' and correct verb forms 'started operating' (gerund after start) or 'began to operate'. 'use bike' needs plural 'bikes' or 'a bike' depending on meaning; 'usually' placement was awkward—use 'more often' after the verb. 'and me too' should be 'and I did too' to be grammatically correct. Maintain consistent tense and correct pronoun case.