自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a full, natural answer: start with a topic sentence, then add 1–2 brief supporting details (where you used it, who you rode with, or a memory). Keep it coherent and avoid one-word replies. Use linking words like “and” or “because” if you add details.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that I rode around my neighborhood every afternoon, and I often went with my friends to the park. It helped me feel independent and improved my balance, so I used it until I was a teenager.

建議: Avoid unclear or irrelevant phrases (e.g. “Who does that?”). Start with a direct opinion, then give specific reasons and a short example. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “so” to organise your answer and make it natural.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and practical for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or to buy groceries, especially in crowded cities where traffic is heavy.

× Who does that? Yes, because the bike is very useful in our country.

✓ Who are you referring to? Yes, bikes are very useful in our country.

The student's reply 'Who does that?' is unclear and ungrammatical in this context; it likely attempts to ask 'Who does that?' meaning 'Who uses bikes?' but is unnecessary. Also 'the bike is very useful' uses a definite article and singular form incorrectly when speaking about bikes in general. Use the plural noun 'bikes' without 'the' to talk about them generally. Suggestion: respond directly to the question with a clear statement about general popularity, e.g., 'Yes, bikes are very useful in our country.'