自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答过于简短且缺乏细节。建议在主题句后用1–2个句子补充具体细节，如什么时候开始、谁给的、骑车的频率或印象最深的一次经历，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。注意不要超过5句。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present from my parents when I was seven, and I rode it to school almost every day. Because of that, I became quite confident cycling on busy streets.

建議: 回答直接但过于笼统，缺乏具体支持信息。建议在主题句后用1–2个句子给出具体原因或例子，例如城市交通、环保意识、或常见的骑行场景，并用连接词衔接观点与原因。保持句子数量不超过5句。

範例: Yes, bikes are extremely popular in my country. Many people use them for short commutes because traffic is often heavy and cycling is cheaper than driving. In addition, cities have been building more bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

该句语法正确，无需改动；时态为过去时，与问题“Did you have... when you were a child?”一致，句子结构和主谓一致均正确。

× Yes, bikes are extremely popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are extremely popular in my country.

该句语法正确，无需改动；使用现在时讨论普遍事实或现状是恰当的，名词复数、冠词及副词位置均正确。