自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is very short and contains a grammatical error and unnatural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child."), then briefly add one or two supporting details (reason or a short memory). Use correct past tense and keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or used public transport. I remember borrowing a neighbour's bike sometimes for short rides.

建議: The answer is unclear and contains many errors and incomplete ideas. Begin with a clear opinion (topic sentence), then give specific supporting details and use linking words (e.g. "Yes, they are popular because..."). Avoid irrelevant fragments and aim for 2–3 coherent sentences using appropriate vocabulary and grammar.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people ride them in the early morning to get to school or work because they are cheap and convenient, especially in small towns. Also, some cities promote cycling by providing bike lanes and public bike-sharing schemes.

× So I do not have a bike.

✓ I did not have a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using present tense 'do not have' is incorrect for past reference. Suggestion: use past simple 'did not have' for completed states in the past.

× Go buy 7:00 in the morning.

✓ People usually ride bikes at 7:00 in the morning.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses verbs that do not fit the intended meaning. Context indicates the student means that people ride bikes at that time. Suggestion: include a subject ('People') and verb phrase ('usually ride bikes') and keep time expression at the end or appropriately placed.

× People use them to permit school or run because they are cheap.

✓ People use them to get to school or to go to work because they are cheap.

Pronoun 'them' is okay for 'bikes' but verb 'permit' is wrong. Likely intended 'get to' or 'go to'. Also 'run' is unclear; replaced with 'go to work' or similar. Suggestion: choose correct verbs for movement ('get to', 'ride to') and parallel infinitives ('to get... or to go...').

× They and some some some things in that country.

✓ They are common and useful in that country.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and repetitive. It lacks a main verb and clear meaning. Suggestion: express the intended idea with a subject 'They', verb 'are', and adjectives or nouns ('common and useful'). Avoid repetitions.

× I eat recycle lens so it's easy to go.

✓ People recycle bicycle parts here, so it is easy to maintain and use bikes.

The original 'I eat recycle lens' is nonsensical — wrong pronoun and words. Likely intended that recycling or repairing makes bikes easy to use. Suggestion: clarify subject (people) and intended action ('recycle' or 'repair') and state the result clearly ('so it is easy to maintain and use bikes').