自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, fluency and add a bit more specific detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct the adjective order and verb forms, and give one or two concise supporting details using a linking word. Keep answers under five short sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small green bicycle with a sidecar, which I used to take my toys around the neighborhood. Because it was sturdy, I felt confident riding it on rough paths. I remember practicing balancing until I could ride without help.

建議: Make the response more natural and informative. Start with a direct opinion, then give specific reasons or examples linked by connectors (for example, because, moreover, for instance). Avoid filler words and repetition, and expand slightly to show fluency while staying concise.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and commuting. For example, cities have dedicated cycle lanes and shared bike schemes, and you can often see students and office workers cycling to school or work.

× It was color green, a small one with a side car.

✓ It was green, a small one with a sidecar.

The phrase 'color green' is an incorrect adjective construction; the adjective should directly modify the noun: 'It was green.' Also 'side car' should be one word, 'sidecar.' Combine corrections to make the sentence natural: 'It was green, a small one with a sidecar.' Suggestion: place the adjective before the noun and use standard compound noun spelling.

× I think so, because there are many cyclists here, here, here in our country.

✓ I think so, because there are many cyclists in our country.

The repeated 'here, here, here' is redundant and breaks sentence flow; it appears to be filler speech and should be removed for grammatical correctness. Use the preposition 'in' with 'our country' to indicate location. Suggestion: avoid filler repetitions in formal responses and use a single appropriate preposition: 'in our country.'