自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сформулируйте ответ более естественно и грамматически правильно: используйте прошедшее время для детских воспоминаний, простые связки и избегайте лишних слов. Дайте короткое основное предложение, затем одно дополнительное предложение с причиной смены привычки. Обратите внимание на согласование времён (например, "I rode" вместо "I ride") и на отрицательные формы ("I don't use it anymore").

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it regularly until I was about 40, but I don't use it anymore because I now have a car.

建議: Дайте более связный и точный ответ: начните с общей позиции, затем приведите конкретную причину и пример. Избегайте ненужных пауз и слов-паразитов, используйте числительные корректно ("every third person" или "one in three people"). Расширьте объяснение одним конкретным фактом или примером и используйте связки, например "because" или "for example".

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because about one in three people use them. For example, many people cycle to work or school since cycling is healthy and often faster than driving in busy cities.

× I had a bike when I was a child, so until 40 years old I ride a bike but now I don't use anymore because I have a car.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, and I rode a bike until I was 40 years old, but now I don't use it anymore because I have a car.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses and uses incorrect time expressions. Use past tense 'rode' for actions that continued in the past. Replace 'until 40 years old' with 'until I was 40 years old'. Include the object 'it' after 'use'. Use 'and' to connect clauses smoothly. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past habits and use correct subject references. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yes, of course. I think bikes are very popular in my country because every. 3rd persons use it.

✓ Yes, of course. I think bikes are very popular in my country because every third person uses them.

Errors: incorrect quantifier punctuation and form ('every. 3rd persons'), plural mismatch, and pronoun reference. Use 'every third person' (singular) with singular verb 'uses', or use 'people'/'them' for plural. Here 'every third person' is preferable: it is singular in form but can be followed by 'uses' and refer to people; using 'them' matches 'bikes' as plural. Suggestion: write ordinal words fully ('third') and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun number. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× It's because of, uh, it is uh, useful for our health and uh.

✓ This is because bikes are useful for our health.

The original is disfluent and contains filler words ('uh') and an incorrect structure 'It's because of, it is ...'. Remove fillers and simplify: 'This is because bikes are useful for our health.' Ensure clear subject ('bikes') and adjective usage ('useful for our health'). Suggestion: avoid fillers, use concise explanation sentences. Grammar problem type ID: 26