自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and accurate in tense and give a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question fully (use past tense), then add one short specific detail (why you had one or how you used it). Keep it natural and up to 2–3 short sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

建議: Answer directly and avoid filler words. Begin with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, they are very popular.”), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, “because” or “for instance”). Keep sentences concise and use plural agreement (bikes are popular, not it).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and exercise. For example, most teenagers ride bikes to school or meet friends at local parks on weekends.

× I do.

✓ I did.

The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which uses past tense. The student's reply 'I do.' is present tense and does not match the past-time context. Use the past tense 'I did.' to show you had a bike in childhood. Suggestion: When responding to questions framed in past tense, answer using past tense verbs (e.g., 'I did', 'Yes, I had one').

× Uh, right now or to this day, yes, it's really popular.

✓ Uh, right now and to this day, bicycles are really popular.

The student mixes 'right now' and 'to this day' which are compatible but the original 'it's really popular' uses singular 'it' without a clear singular noun; in context 'bikes' is plural from the question. Use 'bicycles are' or 'bikes are' to match the plural subject and present-tense general statement. Suggestion: Refer back to the plural noun from the question and match verb number and tense (e.g., 'Bikes are really popular' or 'Bicycles remain very popular').

× Most of the teenagers here, umm, like to go biking.

✓ Most of the teenagers here like to go biking.

The original sentence is mostly correct but contains an unnecessary comma that could interrupt subject-verb flow; the verb 'like' correctly agrees with the plural subject 'most of the teenagers.' Removing the pause improves fluency. Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary commas that break subject and verb; keep 'Most of the teenagers here like to go biking.'