自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Keep answers grammatically correct, concise and directly relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense here), avoid unnecessary details, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and stay within 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was in primary school. My mother let me ride it to school so I could get some exercise every morning, which I enjoyed because it made me feel energetic for the day.

建議: Begin with a clear opinion, use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary, and support your view with one or two specific reasons. Use linking words (for example, however, because) and avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

範例: Not very popular, especially in big cities like Bangkok. Because the climate is often hot and humid and traffic is heavy, many people prefer public transport or motorbikes instead of bicycles.

× I do have a bike when I was in primary school because my mom decided to allow me to take my bicycle to the nursery school so that I could have some exercise in the morning and that is it.

✓ I had a bike when I was in primary school because my mom allowed me to take it to the nursery so that I could get some exercise in the morning.

Grammar Problem Type IDs: 5 (Past tense issue), 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors), 22 (Article errors). The sentence mixes present tense 'do have' with past time reference 'when I was', which is inconsistent; use past simple 'had'. 'Decided to allow me to' is wordy; 'allowed me to' is more natural in past context. 'Take my bicycle to the nursery school' is awkward: use 'take it to the nursery' or 'take my bike to nursery'; 'nursery school' can be shortened to 'nursery' depending on intended meaning. 'That is it' is unnecessary and informal. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense, simplify wording, and remove redundant phrase.

× Regarding to the weather in Thailand, which considered to be, uh, humility and hot, it then make the bike become less popular, especially in Bangkok where people are not only tend to use public transportation regarding.

✓ Because of Thailand's weather, which is considered humid and hot, bikes are less popular, especially in Bangkok where people also tend to use public transportation.

Grammar Problem Type IDs: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 6 (Present tense issue), 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'Regarding to' is incorrect; use 'because of' or 'regarding' (without to). 'Which considered to be' lacks a verb; use 'which is considered'. 'Humility' is the wrong word; correct adjective is 'humid'. 'It then make' mixes pronoun and verb number; use passive or plural subject: 'bikes are less popular' or 'this makes bikes less popular'. 'Make the bike become' is awkward; use 'are less popular'. The final phrase 'regarding' is misplaced and unnecessary; 'also tend to use public transportation' is clearer. Suggestion: use correct prepositions, correct adjective 'humid', ensure subject-verb agreement, and simplify sentence structure.