自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy, sentence structure and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb tenses and pronouns, and keep answers concise (no more than 3–4 sentences). Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “so”, “because”, “but”). Be specific about details (how often you rode, who you shared with, and any memories).

範例: I didn’t have my own bike as a child, but I shared one with my siblings. We had a single bicycle for three children, so we took turns riding it after school. Because there was only one bike, I often walked to school or played nearby instead.

建議: Correct vocabulary and clarity issues, use precise nouns and fix phrasing. Begin with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, “because” and “however”). Avoid non-words like “hotels” and be specific about who prefers cars and why. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Although there are many shops selling bikes in all sizes, most people prefer cars or public transport because of heavy traffic and long distances between places. However, bikes are more common in small towns or among people who want to exercise.

× I don't have my own bike, but I. Did share the bicycle with my other siblings.

✓ I didn't have my own bike, but I did share a bicycle with my siblings.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so past tense should be used. 'I don't have' is present; change to 'I didn't have'. 'Did share' is unnecessary auxiliary for a simple past affirmative; use 'did share' only for emphasis—here 'shared' or 'did share' are acceptable; 'the bicycle' is too specific—use 'a bicycle'. Also 'my other siblings' is unnatural; 'my siblings' is correct. Suggestion: Use consistent past simple: 'I didn't have my own bike, but I shared a bicycle with my siblings.'

× He have one bicycle we share with three people.

✓ He had one bicycle; we shared it among three people.

The sentence refers to the past, so verbs must be in past tense. 'He have' is incorrect for both number and tense: correct past singular is 'he had'. Also the sentence is two clauses that need punctuation or a conjunction; add a semicolon or 'and'. 'We shared it among three people' clarifies meaning and uses correct past tense and agreement. Suggestion: 'He had one bicycle, and we shared it among three people.'

× I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country.

✓ I didn't think bicycles were very popular in my country.

The examiner's question used present tense 'Do you think...?' but because the student is discussing a general situation it's acceptable in present: however surrounding responses are past-focused. If answering now, present tense 'I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country.' is actually correct. If context is general/current, keep present; if maintaining past narrative, use past. Here to be consistent with rest of answers about general popularity, keep present: 'I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country.' Suggestion: Decide tense based on context; for current general opinion use present simple.

× There are many bicycle shops selling very hotels and sizes for toddlers as adults, but most people prefer cars or public transport because of heavy traffic and long distance.

✓ There are many bicycle shops selling various models and sizes for toddlers as well as adults, but most people prefer cars or public transport because of heavy traffic and long distances.

'Very hotels' is a typographical/word-choice error; likely meant 'various models'. 'Sizes for toddlers as adults' needs parallel structure: 'sizes for toddlers as well as adults' or 'for toddlers and adults'. 'Long distance' should be plural 'long distances' when speaking generally. Also 'selling various models and sizes' uses correct noun choices and adjective order. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary ('various models') and parallel structure ('as well as') and pluralize general nouns ('long distances').