自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Tránh lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ dùng 'bike' nhưng nói 'bath'), loại bỏ tiếng lắp và từ thừa, và cấu trúc câu nên có câu chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết bổ trợ. Nên dùng liên từ hoặc cụm nối (e.g., "because", "so", "when") để làm rõ thông tin và trình tự. Ngoài ra chú ý phát âm từ quan trọng như "bought" và tránh tiếng ậm ừ.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bicycle when I was a child because my father bought it for me from a local shop. I rode it to visit friends and practice every weekend, so I became quite confident on two wheels.

建議: Trả lời cần chính xác ngữ pháp và rõ ràng: tránh mâu thuẫn như dùng 'But' không cần thiết; dùng cấu trúc hoàn chỉnh và nối ý hợp lý. Cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (ai dùng, vì sao, ví dụ) và dùng từ nối (e.g., "because", "for example", "in my city"). Tránh lặp từ như 'very, very' và cụm 'everyone is' không hoàn chỉnh. Chú ý trật tự từ: 'start to go' → 'start going' hoặc 'go to school by bike'.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For example, many students and workers start going to school or work by bike, especially in smaller cities. Riding a bike is also good for health and helps avoid traffic.

× When I was a child I had a bath.

✓ When I was a child I had a bike.

The student likely used 'had a bath' by mistake; context asks about owning a bike in childhood so the verb and object should reflect possession. Keep past simple 'had' for past possession. Suggestion: use accurate noun that matches the question and maintain past simple tense.

× My father bought it in a store for me. Too. MMM for me.

✓ My father bought it for me in a store.

The original has fragmented and repeated elements. Combine into a single complete sentence: subject + past verb + object + prepositional phrase. Remove redundant 'Too' and filler 'MMM'. Suggestion: keep word order 'My father bought it for me in a store.'

× But it's very, very popular in my country.

✓ But bikes are very, very popular in my country.

The pronoun 'it' is unclear because the question asks about 'bikes' (plural). Use plural noun and present simple 'are' to state a general fact. Suggestion: match number and subject with the topic: 'bikes are...'.

× Everyone is.

✓ Everyone rides them.

'Everyone is' is an incomplete sentence. Provide a verb phrase to complete the idea. Use present simple 'rides' to indicate habitual action and plural object 'them' to refer to bikes. Suggestion: say 'Everyone rides them.' or 'Almost everyone rides a bike.'

× Starting go to school by bike and it's really good for health, you know?

✓ They start going to school by bike, and it's really good for their health, you know?

Use 'start' + gerund 'going' to show the action beginning. Also adjust subject 'They' and possessive 'their health'. Add comma and conjunction for correct sentence flow. Suggestion: 'They start going to school by bike, and it's really good for their health.'