自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and has many hesitations. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and avoid filler words. Link ideas with simple connectors (e.g., “so”, “and”, “because”). Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it mainly to ride around the neighborhood and visit my friends, so I often spent hours outside after school. It was a simple, second-hand bike but it gave me a lot of freedom and fun.

建議: Your answer is understandable but repetitive and contains grammar errors. Improve by giving a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons or examples and linking words (e.g., “because”, “for example”, “also”). Use correct verb tenses and plural forms.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or school, especially in crowded cities, and some families prefer them for short trips to the market.

× Yes, I when I want to try uh, I have a try advisor. Amazing. Is that to go to schools or go to school?

✓ Yes. When I wanted to try, I asked for advice. It was amazing. Is that about going to school or going to schools?

The original contains fragmented clauses, incorrect verb tenses, and unclear phrasing. 'I when I want to try' is a sentence structure error and should be 'When I wanted to try' (past tense). 'I have a try advisor' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I asked for advice' or 'I had an advisor'. Break into clear sentences: 'When I wanted to try, I asked for advice. It was amazing.' The final question needs parallel form: 'going to school or going to schools'. Use consistent verb forms and separate ideas into distinct sentences. Suggestion: simplify into short complete sentences, ensure subjects and verbs are present, and match tense to the past context.

× Yes, definitely. My people in my country used by to go go to work, go to schools throughout. Go to work and go to school.

✓ Yes, definitely. People in my country used to go to work and to school by bike.

The sentence has multiple issues, notably incorrect pronoun/possessive phrase 'My people in my country' and extraneous words 'used by' and repeated verbs. The intended meaning is general, so use 'People in my country'. 'Used by to go' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'used to' (past habitual). Also ensure proper infinitive: 'to go to work and to school by bike.' Suggestion: use 'people' for general statements, use the idiom 'used to' for habitual past actions, and place the means 'by bike' after the verbs.