自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct but use correct tense and add a brief reason or detail. Keep under five sentences. For example, say whether you ever owned or used one and give a short explanation. Use past tense for childhood. Link ideas with simple connectors.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived nearby. Occasionally, I borrowed a neighbor’s bike for short rides, but I never owned one.

建議: Answer directly and fix grammar and clarity. Use linking words (however, because, so) and give a specific reason or example. Avoid repetition and aim for 2–3 sentences. Mention who ‘they’ are if you refer to people.

範例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer walking or using public transport. For example, many residents walk short distances for exercise and take buses for longer trips, so bike ownership remains low.

× No, I have not.

✓ No, I did not.

The question uses past tense 'Did you have', so the response must use past tense as well. 'Have not' is present perfect and does not match the simple past question. Use 'did not' for simple past negation. Suggestion: match the verb tense of the question; use 'did' + base verb for simple past negatives.

× I don't think so because in our country they are.

✓ I don't think so because in our country they are not.

The student began with present tense 'I don't think' so continuation should use correct present-tense negative. The clause 'they are' is incomplete and likely intended to be negative. Add 'not' to form the negative present 'they are not'. Suggestion: complete predicates and ensure negatives include 'not' or use contraction 'aren't'.

× They chose to walk because walking as a as a good exercise in our body.

✓ They choose to walk because walking is good exercise for the body.

Multiple structural errors: tense mismatch 'chose' (past) after present 'don't think' should be present 'choose'; repeated 'as a as a' is a typo; missing verb 'is' and incorrect prepositional phrase 'in our body'. Corrected sentence uses present tense 'choose', includes 'is', and uses 'for the body' or better 'for their bodies'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent, remove duplicate words, include linking verb 'is', and use 'for the body' or 'for their bodies' to show benefit.