自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, grammatically correct topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using appropriate tense and linking words. Correct tense (past) and concise phrasing will improve clarity. For example, say you didn’t own a bike, explain why briefly, and mention any alternative (walking, public transport) to enrich the answer.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family struggled financially. However, I usually walked to school or took public buses, which helped me become more independent.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific reasons and details. Use correct verb forms and pluralization, and be precise about time references. Mention who uses bikes and in what situations to make the answer more informative.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For one thing, we host national cycling events that raise interest, and during the pandemic many people bought bicycles for exercise and short trips, especially in cities where cycling lanes were improved.

× I don't have a chance to have a bike when I was a child because my family is facing financial crisis.

✓ I didn't have a chance to have a bike when I was a child because my family was facing a financial crisis.

The sentence mixes present tense ('don't have', 'is facing') with a past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use past tense consistently: 'didn't have' for the negative past and 'was facing' for the past continuous. Also add the article 'a' before 'financial crisis'. Suggestion: keep all verbs in the past when referring to past situations and include necessary articles.

× Bikes are popular in my country because our country is competing in a bike race and during pandemic a lot of people have bought bike.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country because our country competed in a bike race and during the pandemic a lot of people bought bikes.

The original mixes present continuous ('is competing') and present perfect ('have bought') with a general statement about popularity. If the race and buying occurred in the past, use simple past: 'competed' and 'bought'. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'pandemic' and use the plural 'bikes'. Ensure tense consistency and correct article and plural usage.