自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Use correct tense and a concise natural structure. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add one or two supporting details (where you rode it or who it belonged to). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me on my seventh birthday. I used to ride it around the neighborhood with my friends almost every day.

建議: Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and use clearer vocabulary (ride, commute). Begin with a direct opinion, then give one or two specific reasons or examples, using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many children and adults use them to get to school or work. For example, in my neighborhood children often ride to school and parents use bicycles for short trips to the market.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence uses present tense 'do have' but the time expression 'when I was a child' requires past tense. Change to past simple 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: Use past simple for completed past situations (I had).

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because all almost all of the children has bike and they use it to drive from school to school from their house.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because almost all of the children have bikes and they use them to travel from home to school.

Multiple errors that match subject-verb agreement and other listed types: 'all almost all of the children has' has incorrect word order and 'has' disagrees with plural 'children' (use 'have'). 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match 'children' and quantifier 'almost all'. 'use it' is wrong pronoun for plural (use 'them'). 'drive from school to school from their house' is awkward and incorrect preposition/word choice; use 'travel from home to school' or 'from school to home'. Suggestions: Correct word order to 'almost all of the children', match plural verbs and nouns, use plural pronouns, and use natural prepositions 'from home to school'.