自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with grammar and clarity. Use correct tense and modal verbs: say why you didn’t have a bike with a correct phrase such as “couldn’t afford” (not “can afford”). Keep the answer natural and concise: give a direct topic sentence then one brief supporting detail. Avoid unnecessary words.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. However, I often borrowed bikes from neighbors to ride to the park, which helped me learn to balance and ride safely.

建議: Improve grammar, plurality and pronouns, and add a linking word for coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, bikes are very popular”), then give two specific reasons using correct structures and linking words like “for example” or “because”. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students cycle to school and adults often ride to work to avoid traffic. In addition, some cities have good bike lanes, which makes cycling safer and more common.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents can afford it.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford it.

The original uses 'can' which expresses present ability; however the sentence refers to the past ('when I was a child'), so a past modal is required. Use 'couldn't' or 'could not' to show lack of ability in the past. Also contracting 'couldn't' is acceptable in speech. Suggestion: match modal tense to the time frame (past).

× Yes, it's very popular in our country.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in our country.

The student refers to 'bikes' (plural) in the question, but says 'it's' (singular) which mismatches the subject. Use the plural subject 'they' with plural verb 'are' to agree with 'bikes'. Ensure pronouns agree in number with the noun they replace.

× We use it bike when they're going to school.

✓ We use bikes when we go to school.

Multiple issues: incorrect pronoun 'it' for 'bikes', wrong word order 'it bike', and inappropriate continuous 'they're going' for habitual action. Habitual actions use simple present ('we go'). Use plural 'bikes' and plural pronoun 'we' or 'they' consistently. Suggestion: simplify to 'We use bikes when we go to school.'

× They also use it when they going to work.

✓ They also use them when they go to work.

'It' is incorrect pronoun for plural 'bikes'; use 'them'. Also verb form 'going' lacks auxiliary for present continuous; because this describes a habitual action use simple present 'go'. So 'they go to work' is correct. Ensure pronoun number matches and verb form matches tense/aspect.