自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve tense accuracy, grammatical correctness, and provide a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific detail (e.g., how old you were or what you used it for). Keep it natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was eight and used to ride it to a nearby park every afternoon, which helped me become more confident on the road.

建議: Make the sentence more natural and provide a reason or brief example using linking words. Use correct prepositions and a clearer structure: state your opinion, then give a specific reason or example to support it.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children who are learning to ride; for example, many neighborhoods have bike classes and parks where families practice on weekends.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid.

The sentence mixes present tense ('do have') with a past time expression ('when I was a kid'). Use past tense 'had' to match the past time. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past situations (I had a bike).

× Yes, especially to the kids that are still learning how to ride a bike.

✓ Yes, especially for kids who are still learning how to ride a bike.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'for' expresses the intended beneficiary group. Also use 'kids' (no article) and 'who' rather than 'that' for people. Suggestion: use 'for kids who are still learning' to sound natural and grammatically correct.