自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời sai về dạng ngữ pháp và nội dung: học sinh đã lặp lại câu hỏi nhưng thay đổi một từ thành 'pie' (bánh) và dùng thì hiện tại thay vì thì quá khứ. Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ở thì quá khứ, kèm theo một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ, dùng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng và tránh lặp câu hỏi. Hãy dùng tối đa 3-4 câu, kết hợp liên từ nếu cần.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that I used to ride around my neighborhood. I particularly enjoyed biking to the park with my friends on weekends.

建議: Câu trả lời có nội dung phù hợp nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và cấu trúc để tự nhiên hơn. Lưu ý số ít/số nhiều (country thay vì countries), sử dụng mạo từ và danh từ đếm được chính xác, và hoàn thiện ví dụ cụ thể. Nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1-2 câu chi tiết với liên từ (e.g., because, for example). Tránh câu không hoàn chỉnh như 'For example student and orphan workers often.'

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips in cities. They are affordable and easy to park, so many students and delivery workers use them every day. For example, I often see university students cycling to campus in the morning.

× Do you have a pie when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used present tense 'Do you have' with a past time expression 'when you were child', which is inconsistent (Present vs Past) and also changed 'bike' to 'pie' and omitted the article 'a' before 'child'. Use past simple for past habits: 'Did you have'. Also use correct vocabulary 'bike' and include the indefinite article and word order: 'when you were a child'. Suggestions: use past simple questions with 'did' + base verb for past situations and remember articles and correct nouns.

× Well, I think bikes are quite popular in my countries, especially for short trips in cities because they are cheap and easy to park. For example student and orphan workers often.

✓ Well, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips in cities because they are cheap and easy to park. For example, students and delivery workers often use them.

Errors: 'my countries' should be singular 'my country' (incorrect plural form). 'student and orphan workers often' is ungrammatical and ambiguous: likely meant 'students and (other) workers' or 'delivery workers'; 'student' needs plural 'students'; 'orphan' is wrong contextually. Also the sentence lacked a verb for the example clause. Added 'use them' to complete the sentence and added a comma after 'For example'. Suggestions: ensure subject and noun number agree, choose appropriate nouns for context, and include a verb to complete clauses. Use commas to introduce examples.