自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời nên trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi ở thì quá khứ và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh dùng cấu trúc sai ngữ pháp (ví dụ ‘I am’ không đúng trong ngữ cảnh quá khứ). Nên nói rõ bạn có hay không, mô tả ngắn về chiếc xe (màu sắc, ai tặng, bạn sử dụng thế nào) và giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu. Dùng liên từ nếu cần để nối ý.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was six. I used it every day to ride to the park and visit my friends, which helped me become more independent.

建議: Câu trả lời hiện tại lộn xộn, có nhiều lỗi phát âm/grammatical và thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp về quan điểm (yes/no or not), rồi giải thích lý do với các chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: giao thông, phát triển xe máy, cơ sở hạ tầng). Sử dụng liên từ như 'because', 'however' để nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

範例: Bikes used to be very popular in my country, but they are less common now because more people prefer motorbikes and cars. However, cycling is becoming popular again in some cities due to bike-sharing schemes and growing awareness of health and the environment.

× Yes, I am.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student was asked about a past possession (Did you have a bike when you were a child?). The response 'Yes, I am.' incorrectly uses the verb 'to be' and a present tense form. The correct short answer to a past simple question uses the auxiliary 'did' plus subject (Yes, I did). Suggestion: use 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had one' to correctly match past tense.

× In the past by he by his own very popular in my country, but but not now.

✓ In the past, people had their own bikes and they were very popular in my country, but not now.

The original sentence has multiple structure and pronoun errors: 'by he by his own' is ungrammatical and unclear, and word order is incorrect. The intended meaning is that in the past many people owned bikes and bikes were popular. Correction uses 'people had their own bikes' and 'they were very popular' to match past tense and clarify the subject. Suggestion: identify the subject ('people' or 'bikes'), use correct possessive forms ('their own bikes'), keep consistent past tense ('had', 'were'), and avoid repeated words like 'but but'.