自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (tense and articles), avoid redundancy, and finish the thought. Use one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Also correct sentence endings and word order.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I always wanted one because I found cycling exciting and it seemed a good way to get exercise. In the future I plan to buy a bike so I can ride on weekend trails.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence about popularity, use correct subject-verb agreement, and explain reasons with coherent linking words. Be specific about what government did and finish your point. Keep it within a few sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are becoming more popular in my country. Recently the government introduced new cycling lanes and safety regulations, which has encouraged more people to cycle. As a result, you can now see more cyclists commuting and using bicycles for short trips.

× Unfortunately I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I'd like to have one.

✓ Unfortunately I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I would have liked one.

The second clause uses 'I'd like to have one' which mixes present desire with past context; because the question refers to childhood, a past perspective is more appropriate. Use 'I would have liked one' to express a past desire. Alternatively, if expressing a current desire for a bike now, keep present: 'but I'd like to have one now.' Ensure tense consistency between clauses.

× I find it always interesting to ride a bike.

✓ I always find it interesting to ride a bike.

Adverb placement: 'always' should come before the main verb in simple present tense. The original word order is unnatural in English. Place 'always' before 'find' to produce a natural present-tense statement.

× In future probably I can buy for my.

✓ In the future, I will probably be able to buy one for myself.

Multiple issues: missing article 'the' before 'future', incorrect modal 'can' for a future prediction (use 'will be able to' or 'will probably'), wrong object 'for my' should be 'for myself' or simply 'one'. Also include comma after introductory phrase. The corrected sentence uses proper future construction and correct reflexive pronoun.

× Right now it is, it is and it's growing it's popularity because recently government accepted confirm the rule for this and right now, nowadays we have special.

✓ Right now it is popular, and its popularity is growing because the government recently approved rules for this, and nowadays we have special facilities.

Several errors: 'it is' is vague; 'it's growing it's popularity' uses incorrect possessive 'it's' (contraction) instead of 'its' and awkward structure—use 'its popularity is growing'. 'government accepted confirm the rule' is ungrammatical: use 'the government recently approved rules' or 'confirmed a rule'. Missing article before 'government' ('the government'). The sentence fragment 'and right now, nowadays we have special.' is incomplete—add a noun like 'facilities' or 'lanes'. Combined corrections address subject-verb agreement, possessive pronoun, article use, verb choice, and complete the sentence.