自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答过于简短，缺乏信息量。需要做主题句并给出具体细节（例如什么时候有、谁送的、经常去哪儿骑、对你的影响等），并使用连接词使表达连贯。保持不超过5句。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven as a birthday gift from my parents, and I rode it almost every day after school. Because I lived near a park, I often cycled there with my friends, which helped me become more confident and independent. Overall, having a bike made my childhood active and social.

建議: 回答太简短且缺乏理由和例子。应该给出一个主题句并用一两句理由或例子支持，例如普及原因、使用场景或政府政策，并使用连接词提高连贯性。保持不超过5句。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For instance, in cities there are extensive bike lanes and shared-bike programs, so students and office workers often cycle to work or school. Additionally, cycling is promoted as a cheap and eco-friendly option.

× Examiner: Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Examiner: Did you have a bike when you were a child?

该句为考官的问题，使用过去时“Did ... have”询问过去拥有情况，结构与时态都正确，无需修改。

× Student: Yes.

✓ Student: Yes, I did.

原句简短回答“Yes”在口语中可接受，但为了更完整并且与提问时态一致，建议改为“Yes, I did.”（简短回答也可接受）。解释：问题是过去时，完整的简短回答用助动词“did”来呼应。

× Examiner: Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Examiner: Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

该句为考官的问题，使用一般现在时询问普遍事实，句子结构与时态正确，无需修改。

× Student: Yes.

✓ Student: Yes, they are.

原句“Yes”作为简短回答在口语中可接受，但更完整的回答应与问题的主语和时态一致，建议用“Yes, they are.”来呼应复数主语“bikes”。